Bit of a Challenge

As part of a group on Facebook, I was challenged to make a Double Pocket card.
I'm really not so sure about this one and do hope the recipient is not sorely disappointed.

What do YOU think of it? Does it 'work'?
I defiinitely need to try this out again on another occcasion.
However, the sentiment remains the same - Marilyn, I hope you had a super birthday, my lovely!xx